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Chapter 53

Now within a short time, the death sentence was to be given to Anthony. Sam, an authority to give the death sentence, and a doctor stood near the electric chair chamber.
Two police staff brought in a handcuffed Anthony. An authority checked his watch and signalled to the police staff. The police staff took Anthony to the electric chair.

"Where is the operator?" one of the officers asked.

A person came forward and went to the electric chair operation panel. The police staff who took Anthony to the chair made him to sit on the electric chair and covered his head with a black covering. The police staff came out and closed the electric chair chamber.
A guard looked at the operator. The operator stood in a ready position near the electric chair panel. The authority looked again at his watch, continuously, counting down. Though it was common practice for these people, tenseness could be sensed in this environment. Suddenly, the authority signalled the operator. The operator immediately pressed the electric chair panel button. 
After some time, the operator looked at the authority with an 'it’s finished' expressions on his face. 

"Doctor" the authority called out loudly.

The doctor rushed to the electric chair chamber, opened it and checked inside.

"Sir, he is dead" the doctor's voice confirmed from the chamber.
The authorities turned and left the place. The operator entered the adjacent room. Other staff entered the chamber, probably to clean up.  This was an unusual occasion for Sam; he was still standing there and observing the procedure. 
Now the doctor also left the place. The detective was still standing there yet seemed, mentally, to be somewhere else. Suddenly, somebody came from his behind.

"Oh, I am relieved" the voice came from his behind.

Sam looked behind and was stunned. The operator was standing in front of him.
He had just entered the adjacent room...
And all of a sudden where had he come from?

"I was worried how you would manage in my absence..." the operator said.

"By the way, who operated the panel?" the operator asked.

Sam looked into the adjacent room in which the operator had entered. 

"What do you mean by whom? You operated the panel" Sam said in disbelief.

"Are you kidding? I just got here" the operator defended. 

Sam looked at him in confusion and then at the closed adjacent room. 

"Come, follow me." 

They went into the adjacent closed room.
Sam pushed the door but the door was latched from the inside. He knocked; waited for some time but there was no response. Sam started pushing with his full strength yet the door did not open. The confused operator also joined him in pushing the door.
Pushing, hammering, at last  the detective and the operator broke the door. Quickly 
Sam and the operator entered the room and looked around; there was nobody inside. They looked at each other, confusion on operator’s face while eerie expressions on Sam’s. Suddenly, something fell from above, both of them startled. It was a black cat, which jumped. The cat stood right in front of them, stared at Sam continuously. Slowly, the cat morphed into a decomposed corpse. The operator started shivering. Stunned, Sam and the operator looked at it. Slowly, the decomposed corpse morphed into a beautiful, young lady. Yes, it was Nancy. Now she was beaming up with satisfaction on her face. Slowly, two big tears came out of her eyes and gradually she disappeared.


The End.



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Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Adam Hughes


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113 comments:

  1. ohh!! its such a beautiful story.
    i was soo deeply touched by it.
    The climax was written superbly an every detail in the story was so thoughtfully planned that the reader is stuck to its each an evry line.the story doesnt loose any grip in between. i m indeed moved my the romance of the story

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  2. its really gud.. the story dsnt loose its grip..

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  3. This is an absolute thriller, Please can you clear some of my doubts. Is this a real life incident!! Sam please asnwer my question???
    Cheers to the author
    !!!!!!

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  4. i started reading this novel at mid night... and was just getting into it..i could actually feel it.... i continuasly read it..untill i finshed it.... it was a wonderfull novel i have read so far....

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  5. really touching and thrilling story....

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  6. 'MARVELOUS!!!'
    THATS THE MOST ABBREVIATION I CAN DESCRIBE IT IN. . . :-o:-):-D
    Sunil u r a genious man...
    Great. !
    Thnx buddy.
    See you...

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  7. Really! it is a novel full of suspense and curiosity. It is so nice that I finished at a stretch.Please let me know the name of author so i will read her/his novel regularly.

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  8. [b] the story was really very nice.......
    i was very much moved by it.....
    i was crying in between the story...i salute the writer and wish him best of luck ..

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  9. I started reading this thrilling novel and couldn´t stop untill I finished it. Congratulations!

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  11. Wow..its such a a nice novel, with sentiment, love, mystery and revenge..all together nice work.

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  12. Oh my!
    Just finished it ... amazing..
    So deeply touched ..
    Just 2 words to express
    Outstanding Work

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  13. I've just in the middle,around Ch-27, not finished yet. However, it goes quite fine.
    Why author name not mentinoed anywhere?

    Has anybody knows the name of the author??
    Any answer is really appreciated...

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  14. It is the greatest novel I have read. It stuns me from the beginning to the end of story. Love could not have changed the emotions of human being from an enemy to be a lover and vice visa.

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  15. Its really superb story,it touched me from inside,while reading this story i just went into it and stop reading till the end came........really touching story.

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  16. where is Jhon? John is a man ,in my opinion,If he wanted to take Nancy to leave, he should thounght all things from all side,and planned it considerably in advanced,so ,I advice all young men that,If you love your girl,you should give her a safe and perfect further,If you can't do if or you have not capability to do it ,don't take your girl from their fathers' protection,sometimes ,their father can't catch up with the girls mind ,they can make their daughters hate them temporary,but not permanent, so if you have enough capability to give your girl a visible further,please give her under the protection of their father,this is a best way you loved her,don't selfish.I wish all girls can hand over themselves to capable men.

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  17. i can say that it was really a good novel .ya it really touched my heart .
    the love story was really good. the tragic element of the novel was really what to say,will touch everyones heart.then the suspense was there till the end .the novel had everything that a good
    reader could probably expect...really a great one.keep on writing.i dont know who you are.but this story really touched my heart.continue your good work...ur frnd....

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  18. Really amazing story....Even any of the women cant forgive Antony....because his love is FAKE.....

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  19. its really amazing novel

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  20. A superb touching novel embedded
    with happiness, suspense, horror, vengeance and thrill. Every sequence brings in a feeling of excitement to the reader. Congratulations to the Author.

    Ram.
    14/8/2009 - 11PM.

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  21. A touching story, which did not leave its grip on readers till finished. I am still in the dream mode as if relieving the entire story in my head.

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  22. Good novel.Language is simple and sweet.Very grippy and involving.
    Javed Shaikh

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  23. Good Novel.Easy and simple language.
    Attractive and gripping.

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  24. its truly heartwarming..and i myself felt d emotions of nancy...rapists shud b killed like dis..no pardon to them

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  25. Great story !!!
    Each n every chapter rises curosity-what would happen in the next chapter and the climax was unbelievable. It was really nice story. Congratulations !!

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  26. Wow !! what a touching sory it was.it seems like a real life story.

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  27. its was simply great.wonderfully written by the writer,that kepts the reader binded.really great job done.

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  28. it was a nice story specially the climax make me astonished.

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  31. Actually i`m not read the novel entirely , but i thought that this novel has it own strength and high potential to be publish...i guess , hope will come true!!!

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  32. ITS A BRILLIANT STORY. THE WRITER KEPT THE SUSPENSE AT ITS PEAK THROUGHOUT THE STORY TILL END. I M FEELING VERY BAD FOR NANCY. POOR GIRL!

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  33. its really a suspense story and so touched by the heart

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  34. It's a g8 one consist all the elements a perfect suspense novel must require.

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  35. Is is a true thriller, Story was very intresting. The twists at different parts of the story were superb.I enjoyed reading it.

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  36. this is my first novel.what a suspense,mystery,great job.from starting to the end there is mystery of murder.I hope this encourages me to read more novels.I thanks the author and this website.

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  37. soooooo... attractive!

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  38. excellent story...
    its really marvellous....
    is it based on real situation...????

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  39. super story... a lot of twists and nice explanation for all the activities in it..

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  40. m deeply...touched by dis novel...diz is one of d awesomme novels..that i had ever read..thumbs up..!!!

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  41. really very nice story...........

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  42. It s a really touchy story about human nature.full of suspense....like it very much.....

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  43. awesome novel.... everything was so clearly explained... real suspense thriller combined with many twists.... but dis story made me too to fear of ghosts.... hat's off man... keep writing.... best of luck

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  44. Hey, believe me it was fantastic! All credit goes to author.

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  45. superb novel
    ds z 4 da frst tym dat i hav read any novel
    da story z relle amazin
    heart touchin horrer thriller
    i relle relle like it
    hat's off 2 da author
    gr8 twstnin novel

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  46. I am very interested by the story
    i tried to guess about the guilty but i cant expect this guilty Anthony and this end and his purpose of murders
    so i admire this story



    thank you

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  47. good story in simple language. I enjoyed reading this superb novel. Thanks to this website.

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  48. Damn good novel, I could not wait finishing it. Awesome novel, One of my favorite ones :) Story and writing skills both are amazing.

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  49. Awesome novel, One of my favorite novels, I could not wait finishing it. Story and writing skills both are amazing.

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  50. simple and nice words..can make people understand and interested to read this novel...awesome*thumb up*

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  51. Really heart touching story... Amazing... Boss let me know is it a true story!?!.../@...

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  52. such a wonderful novel must be written by such a marvelous novelist

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  53. I have read this kind of story for the first time.....fantastic !

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  54. its simply superb...fantastic thriller..is this a true story????

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  55. Its really very nice story, well written by author... I like it very much :-) Complete entertainment

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  56. wowww!! that was awesum n heart touchin stry.....
    authr had done a grt job!! :)

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  57. Great Great Great ... Brawooooooo .... but the John Carter was Very doo number heroo ....

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  58. the novel was awesome...i really liked it...

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  59. very interesting and heart touching story

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  60. It was really nice novel. I could not be able to desist from Aghast. I learnt that if you desire to have something you can get it early or late but you bear consequence. Touched me from inside deeply.
    kadir

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  61. the story took up many turns capturing the each second of me. it is a fully absorbing novel. the dilemma between ghosts and technology kept me in suspense till last. good work

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  62. good...work....

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  63. han acha th not bad

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  64. very nice ... awsome story ... very touchy ... the end was really very nice .... it was nice reading it ....

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  65. very beautiful storyyy!!!!
    john and nancy were beautifully narrated

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  66. it was my first novel an really enjoyed each and every part of it.
    really good!!!!!!!!!!

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  67. so nice read.. really good story...

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  68. really nice story........what a suspense......sunil...u did a great job.....i m reading ur each novel one by one and all are mind blowing......great work......keep writing...all the best!!!!

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  69. its really amazing , i was lost in this novel while reading it ..... simply awesome . this novel proves the existence of supernaturals and revenge from the died one as it doesn't happen in real life wondering how it could be a true story .... well great work .

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  70. really really a good story ...........it made me to sit at the end while reading .........love between nancy and john made me to feel ..........hats off to the author

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  71. really a good thriller , it impressed me much ,love between john and nancy made me to feel ,it kept me to read frm the beginning to end with same interest ,hatsoff to the author

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  72. really a nice 1. gr8 story

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  73. story has a really good and gripping
    climax. And the incidents are very well described in the story the
    scientific touch to the story was something new in the thriller.
    story,the language is simple and can be enjoyed thoroughly.

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  74. oh man,what a thriller that was,every face of the story is so interesting and creates thrill in the mind .supervvvv story,i just loved it

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  75. What a NOVEL....The first novel I read in internet..I am glad that I was very much moved with the way it was presented...Thanks for giving me such a cool feeling..Thanks to Sunil and Adam.

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  76. i just love your way of presenting the story...... good work.....

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  77. The story is very beautiful... the way in which u describe it just fabulous......

    gud jobe sunil...

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  78. i do really love this novel . reading the end chapter , i wish this novel not end early ! i really love the plot , the description of situation , oh ! ireally love it all . very nice one ! good job :) thumbs up !

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  79. It was just awesome. I was engrossed in each and every bit of the line, as if the magic spell had been casted over me. Pure love and an Absolute thriller.....

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  80. awesome!! i luv reading it... climax was amazing:):)

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  81. i love this story....climax was amazing n extremly touched.

    keep going on like this.

    Logesh

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  82. I LOVE THIS NOVEL, HATS OF TO AUTHOR....TOUCHED CLIMAX.....

    KEEP GOING ON LIKE THIS....CONGRATS.

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  83. excellent reading.

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  84. Its really very nice story, well written by author... I like it very much :-) Complete entertainmen

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  85. i hope you will write more nice story like this in the future >>>>>> it has a very strong ending ....... excellent.

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  86. its fantastic thriller....!I realy enjoyed each and every line..Hatsoff to author........!

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  87. There was suspense in each and every chapter and i loved it . . . !!!!

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  88. Really superb!!!!

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  89. I felt thrilling while reading each and every line..Lot of twists in the story it's amazing..

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  90. Got the link to this site just a few days ago and read all the stories of this writer. I loved all his stories. Sunil Doiphode seems to be a superb, very promising writer. Keep up the wonderful Work. All the best for future novels.

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  91. Awe-inspriring story!!!!!

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  92. awsum...novel....endng totaly amzing..plz make mvi on it..by d way it ws like going infrnt of me..each nd evry moment

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  93. It's a really thriller story, which has been read by me and i found one of the best story ever. climax of the story is superb and been molded according to the appropriate situation.

    i wish to writer for upcoming best ever stories.

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  94. Loved the novel.. Awesome :)

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  95. Really good and interesting novels ....enjoyed reading it to the core....great job Sunil...

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  96. Great story I have ever read. Super like

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  97. This is Surya... The story is really nice. Cant stop in midway coz of its thrilling.. And the love was touching as it created sympathy on them. Thanks for a good one..

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  98. story is great. i just want to ask who is the guy who was listening to nancy and john in library? was he Anthony ? and who was following them when they were leaving their places in Taxi ?

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  99. I am really really impressed.......................this is damn gud story.............love it.....................amazing................full of suspense horror................and is damn thrilling.............love it ...............u rock dude..........ur story does'nt lose the grip............love it........keep writing such stories...................
    *WHISTLES*
    *CLAPPING*

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  100. nice story full of meaningful words,scenes,incidents and sense full thoughts and feelings strongly satisfied with the(end)

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