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Chapter 50 - Shadows (The End) - Novel - Illusion

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Priya was staying at Vijay’s house only for last couple of days. She again had a fight with herfather on the same old reason.

Today she got up a little late. Though she was an early riser but when she woke up today, sun was already up on the sky. Priya scanned her room. Vijay’s mother had already started doing her routine activities. Vijay’s sister also was not on her bed.

Actually Vijay’s sister did not have a set routine of getting up or sleeping. She behaved as per her whims. Unlike usual, Priya was feeling very fresh today.

Probably she had got a sound sleep after a very long time. She stretched her limbs and got out of the bed. She stood by the window and was staring outside. She kept standing there for a while. Suddenly someone caught her attention. A man with long beard was coming in her direction only. He did not seem absolutely stranger to her. Priya kept looking at him, trying to make out. But as he kept coming closer to her, she recognized him and glimpse of happiness flashed on her face. She confirmed once again whether she was in her senses or not.

She was ecstatic to find the person in reality. He was none other than Vijay himself. He looked unfamiliar in long beard and moustaches, but she could still recognize him by his gestures and movements. As he approached even closer, Priya was sure that it was Vijay for sure who had come back to her. The person reached the house, opened the main gate and came inside. Now he was standing right in front of Priya.

“Vijay…” Priya almost screamed.

She hugged him tightly and said, “I knew that you are alive and will come back one day. God can’t be so cruel to me…. I know, that day, they got someone else’s dead body… and it was so badly smashed that nobody could recognize it. I knew… I knew god can’t be so cruel to me…”

“Your love kept me alive Priya.” Vijay released himself from her embrace and said holding her face in his hands.

Then they kept talking for a very long time after that. Meanwhile, Vijay’s mother heard some noise and came outside.

“Vijay… where were you all these days? You have lost so much of weight…” Priya was speaking.

Vijay’s mother saw Priya and got a shock of her life… because… Priya was speaking to herself.

“Oh god… my daughter… then my son… and now … Priya also… don’t be so cruel to me god… I can’t bear this anymore…” Vijay’s mother was praying hard.

Priya was unaware about Vijay’s mother’s reaction. She slowly headed to the main gate. While walking, she gestured as if someone is holding her hand and they were walking together. Vijay’s mother followed her. As Priya was waking ahead, her shadow was also following her. Vijay’s mother glanced at her shadow… and she was shaken… she could see another shadow
accompanying her. Vijay’s mother was boggled and frightened. Now she had to believe that Priya was not speaking to herself, but Vijay was there with her, holding her hand.

When Vijay’s mother recovered a little bit, she found that Priya had reached far ahead of her. Now she almost ran to catch them. Vijay’s sister, who was standing in the lawn, followed her mother. She was actually in a very shabby state.

“Wait... Priya…” Vijay’s mother called her out.

Priya stopped. And so did Vijay’s shadow. Vijay’s mother went near Priya. She was very happy to see her son… though his mere shadow. She knelt down to touch her son’s shadow and started caressing it. Vijay’s sister saw her mother kneeling down and she jumped on her to sit on her back. The next moment, she was fondling with her mother’s hair like a child....


....There was a huge crowd gathered in front of Vijay’s house. Everyone was astonished to see what was going on in the crowd. Vijay’s father, who had just returned from the bar, saw this crowd. He joined the crowd to check the chaos. He saw Priya in middle of the crowd… talking to herself. His wife was sitting down and was stroking on the ground. And his daughter was sitting on her mother’s back and was fondling with her hair.

And there were only THREE shadows on the ground… Priya’s, Vijay’s mother’s and his sister’s…..

THE END

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte

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116 comments:

  1. Geeta Yadav - superb novel...:))

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  2. Really Great novel Sir i read marathi then english both versions are awesome!!!

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  3. AWSM NOVL GUD JOB BUDY

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  4. awsm novl,gud job budy

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  5. Aweeeesome ending. I took 4 days to reach here (chapter 50). Done subscribing to "English Novels" above (",)

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  6. good, portray love very well

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  7. I LIKE THIS STORY...........
    ITS A GOOD STORY..............

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  8. what an emotional story........a great novel

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  9. please share the Retail Shop Address of pune....

    where i can buy this Novel Copy.....

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  10. Very Nice novel.I was so engrossed in reading that almost daily I used to wait for it.Nicely potrayed and written.Very heart touching. Keep it Up!!! Congratulations.- Manjiri Joshi

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  11. This is first ever novel I read in my life..just looked for the novels on net n.started.reading.unlike others ,it took me several days to complete as am a beginner..d ending seems to b very fast..overal its a nice novel..like it :)

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  12. as it is my first time to read any novel... so how can i evaluate it accurately to say it is good or bad. to me its a good novel...

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  13. Nice & Interesting One!!

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  14. full of emotions, i loved it.

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  15. full of emotions. I loved it.

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  16. at last even his mother also changed like thata?

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  17. It was amazing....... in this all r unexpected turns. i really enjoyed whle reading. i liked it very much.

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  18. oh my god..very sensational one...and really good twists and turns....loved it.....

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  19. I like this story very much. And I really like it because it was based on the real story. If it would be just fiction, I am not sure that it really could touch my mind.
    I would like to now, what was really happened with these people. Not sure that this could be so dramatic in real life.

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  20. Reality Never and Ever Be Changed Because it Based on nature, as nature never be changed so same as it is Reality never be changed for any one

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  21. Such a touching story....
    I liked it very much...

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  22. Sir its awesome..heart touching story ..i loved it

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  23. Its a awesome novel ,, superb and brilliant!

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  24. I guess i need atleast 2 days rest to not to go into delusion my self.................I m fine ...I will b fine..It was so realistic when I m reading...Awsome novel....

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  25. This story is very much interesting. I appreciate it.

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  26. This is very interesting post, I have really enjoyed this post. its very insightful post and so informative and engaging. Anybody can be enjoy this post.

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  27. what a story...................truely i not understand it
    what this story conclude or revels............ohhhhhhhhhhhh so much difficult to understand

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  28. An awesome novel indeed!! I really found it pleasure 2 read it, in fact it made me more curious to know the ending while reading the novel. I would glad to read more novels like these..

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  29. Very Serious Novel, I was expecting some good ending but this story has a high Twists in it.

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  30. a nice story and extraordinary use of vocabulary best to read by all means

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  31. its so heart touching.i never read much painfull than that.awesome

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  32. great job....i was just carried away ......

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  33. Indians are truly envied by their great talent when it comes to story writting.Keep it up!

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  34. precise but very emotional and interesting. great job

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  35. Fantastic story....I really spellbound with this...heart touching.....Excellent work!!!!!

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  36. i m speechless...

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  37. superb!!! so emotional.. Learnt value of life..

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  38. I have to say it was a wonderful story.

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  39. oh my god what great end. of course it was a wonderful story thanks a lot

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  40. heart breaking novel awesome work .....really unberable true story if it was.....i reading completly in 1 day i took 3 hr rest with my family to move out of it.....hope it was not completly true story about someone how god will turn such cruel for any one like these as in the novel.........but anyways great work ....appreciation....

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  41. it left a strange impression on me....its really a heart-rendering story....
    i still cant believe all that happened!!!
    but m confused a bit about the ending..i think i could not get what the author wanted to indicate...i need help to get it...

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  42. speechless..!!! I got even tears in bet.. I took a week to complete as i have a busy schedule.. Still it kept me drive back to englishnovels.net to complete dis story..!!

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  43. OMG!!! I was so engrossed in reading. This story is of complete twists, I thought priya would marry vijay and every thing would be alright. But, after chapter 46 it is hard to believe and painful to accept the ending.

    But the novel(Illusion) name signifies the ending of the story. Totally it was awesome and thanx to author for giving this emotional and wonderful story.

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  44. really nice!!!

    and also i just got dangerous days by mary roberts rinehart and it is also a nice novel...

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  45. the beginning is really perfect, but while i was reading i so wanted the best ending. I was disapponted to read such ending

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  46. when starts to read, one stops after finishing it.good psychological novel. but is it really based on reality.

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  47. wow... i was so must engrossed that i complete this in two days..... loved it.. Thnks...

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  48. awsome, i think it would take at least one week to get out of this emotional story,

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  49. I don't have any word to write.just awsome!!!

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  50. English Fiction Books collection - ELove Ch-51 Hospital



    Very attractive emotion to Excitedfully novel for Love's obelisk----------------Narayan prasad chaudhari






    As Anjali heard the gun shot from the mobile, she collapsed down. The cheerful environment in the hall suddenly saddened. Inspector rushed and taking help of few other people he held Anjali and made her lie down on the sofa. Somebody rushed to the phone and called for an ambulance.

    Anjali was sprawled on a bed in the hospital. Doctor was standing besides her, checking her BP and Inspector, Bhatiaji, Sharwari and few more were standing around and were looking anxiously.
    “ Doctor how is she?” Sharwari couldn’t stop to ask.
    “ It seems she has gone through a huge shock, which she couldn’t sustain... in such cases its important to let go some time... time being, I have given her a sedative injection... due to which she will be in sleep for some time... during that time it is better that you all sit outside... But as soon as she gets to her senses somebody very close to her should be present around ... Who is the closest one?”
    Doctor asked.
    “ Me” Sharwari answered without any hesitation.
    “ Who are you?... Are you her sister?”
    “ No I am her friend..” Sharwari said.
    “ No body else?... like mother father”
    Sharwari looked around in confusion to compose the proper words to answer this question, when Inspector said, “ Doctor... she didn’t have anybody close in relation”
    “ O.K... no problem... you stay here and take care when she wakes up” Doctor instructed Sharwari.
    “ Yes sir” Sharwari said.
    All other people left the room. Sharwari stayed back; in fact she might not have left the room even if instructed to go out, as she was very much worried about her. She sat near her head, moving her fingers through her hairs. Even if Anjali was her boss, she never treated her that way. She always treated her as a friend - a close friend. In fact when Anjali asked her to join her, it was more as a friend than PA. Sharwari was looking for her to come to her senses.

    Around 2-3 hours might have passed since the sedative was pricked. Outside her room Inspector, Bhatiaji and few other people were still waiting for her to gain consciousness. After she gains consciousness, how she reacts all depended on her mental condition at that time, and how much she recovers from the shock. She was so much mentally and emotionally involved in Vivek, might be it was due to the fact that, she didn’t have anybody close like mother father. And the closest one she considered, leaving her like this was a huge shock.
    A nurse came out of the room and informed, “ Inspector she has gained the consciousness”
    The nurse again disappeared in the room. Everybody waiting outside the room rushed in.

    In the room Anjali was sobbing keeping her head on Sharwari’s lap, and Shawari was trying to console and sooth her patting gently on her back and moving her fingers through her hairs. When she had gone through the shock, she didn’t get enough time to react to it, as she got unconscious immediately. Looking at this heartrending scene everybody present in the room wanted to come forward to console her, but the Doctor hinted them to stop. Doctor was also right, as it was important for her to give the way to her pain in the form of tears. Everybody, though feeling bad, was looking at her helplessly.

    Suddenly a call far away from outside the room could be heard, “ Anjali”

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  51. Really this novel is one of my fav, uenexpected sequences, touch-hearting one. Actually i used to read about 5 chapters per day, but the last 10 chapters took me an entire day to deduce, despite the approaching of the exam interval i couldn't halt reading. well done writer.

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  52. such a sad end..i cried a lot..love this novel bt it would be more good with a happy end

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  53. osam novel ......but very heart touching

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  54. Very Good Novel

    Post by http://twitter.com/term_paperz

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  55. Superb novel can't express the thrill! Very touching..!

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  56. well...i really like this novel. the ending is soooo unexpected... i thought Priya and Vijay would have a happy ending..but it's not until i read the chapter 46 that i realized my prediction was completely wrong :( i have cried...and up to now it's still stuck in my head...sad but amazing!

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  57. awesome story.......unexpected turns...something different.

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  58. Very good love story!

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  59. thank you so much for this fantastic novel in reality i thought vijay will be alive at the end i didn't expect such ending but it's illusion and a real illusion

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  60. You have good experience. TWill definately keep close track of these pages.

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  61. awesome novel ..........very touching!

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  62. Nice story. I would be happy to read another.

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  63. am jut spechless.....sooo heart touching story!!!

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  64. am jut spechless.....the end of des novel made me cry...sooo heart touching story!!!

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  65. amazing story i liked it alooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot sad story :(

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  66. Awsome story.

    Keep up the good work :-)

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  67. It's the first time I read novels in english. frankly speaking I didn't expect such kind of ending. I used 5 days to complete it and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks very much for such strange emotions!!!

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  68. such a sad ending hurted to the core :( how can all the ppl become insane at last.. even it is lovable n heart touching stry.. i was not convinced wth the climax... i can't accpt vijay death it hurted to the core... :( :( :'(

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  69. nice story ... i liked it

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  70. heart touching ...really thrilling end !!

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  71. such a tough ending......

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  72. who can make us cry by their writing he/she is the real authour, writter,what i want to comment about this story infact i have no words to express, i was just cried.

    what an emotional ending, unexpected twists.

    I LOVE THE STORY & AUTHOR'S WAY OF WRITTING.

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  73. The story is definitely hard hitting. It evokes immense shock and sympathy in the end for the characters involved.
    A story that begins with love and friendship provides opportunities for promising lives and ends with irreversible tragedies encompassing the characters.....
    The fact that it is not a piece of fiction but based on real life story leaves the reader filling with agony and sympathy long after the end is over....

    Great work!!!

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  74. Its really great love story with heart touching ending. I hope our Author will present us another touching novel very soon.

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  75. This is the 1st novel which i read @ 1st time via net. The end of this novel can't determine until reach to the end. Superb & great effort.

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  76. i think i learned alot from this novel..iam planing to read more in the site so thank u very mach :)

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  77. Very impressive and class novel written by the Writer.............(In my life 1st time i read the novel and i got interest bcz of this novel & Writer.....) Thank you Sir .....

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  78. i must say u r a great author...soo imotional and heart touching ending...hope will get another story with happy ending...

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  79. speechless..........:)

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  80. Nice Story with sad ending... just cant forget this as it touched for 2 to 3 days...

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  81. Oh my God! Its real illusion...even i thought vijay was back for a happy ever after.....but of course there would be no such end. How love, destiny n fate destroyed everything. No words for such an unexpected climax...

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  82. nice love story with great ethics for love. Really lover should be like priya[in this novel] only.

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  83. I am never much in to writing comments but your works definitely strikes a chord & compels me to write my review.
    this is the 3rd day I've come on ur site.&I have read 2 wonderful novels of yours in 2 days.Now I take it as you are really brilliant in your job of holding the interest of a reader & keeping them hooked with it till the end of the story.Just love your work!keep it up:)
    Hoping to read your other lovely & page turner novels soon:)
    God bless you!

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  84. awesome one.........i really love romance stories with a thrill....and this one was awesome...i really loved it...

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  85. i couldn't stop reading it at one go.....superb twists....really good English too...very good...

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  86. Good work by author...
    Superb nd touching story.

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  87. awesome work by the author...i wish it doesn't happen wid anybody in real life.
    This novel taught a lesson about relations and their value in our life.
    Ahhhhhh.....finished it in one go and its totally over my mind!

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  88. I CANT EXPLAIN HOW I WEPT AT THE END.I COULD NOT HELP RUNNING WATER FROM BOTH THE EYES.WHY DOES THIS HAPPEN WITH THOSE WHO ARE ALREADY IN THE PAIN OF CIRCUMSTANCES OF LIFE? WHY DO THEY NOT GET AN ENJOYABLE LIFE LIKE OTHERS? WHY THEY ARE NOT MADE FOR HAPPINESS ATLEAST ONCE?.....WHY ?....WHY ?....WHY ?.................................................IT GIVES ME A LOT OF PAIN WHEN STORY IS REAL.................

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  89. nice..but expected a nice ending, very sad that it is based on real life

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  90. It was a very realistic but pessimistic story... u gave hope and you shattered it.. brilliant work. Though unexplainable if god can really be so cruel!

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  91. vei heart touching story.... can't stop myself from crying completed it in 3 days.... but didnt liked d end i didnt wanted it to end dis way... i too thought for a while dat vijay is back but :( :(

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  92. narration is good. but nice ending should be expected

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  93. A good psycological novel with good naration.

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  94. Is this a real story? Did it happen in real life of somebody

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  95. For the first time I read any novel , and im glad I didnt waste my time .... so heart touching

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  96. waiting from a long time for the new novel. you have mentioned about as ( coming soon). But no use. Please publish it as soon as possible & write them in Hindi also.

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  97. great novel..,i never read such a interesting story before my life ......good job keep working on it

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  98. gr8t love story, heart touching

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  99. Great Novel.............weeping while reading.

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  100. itz gud and interesting, but some part and ending part does not satisfy me bcz the sacrifice of lyf did't give a lyf worth living.But it was great true frndship story.

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  101. Good narration :) Worth reading!

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  102. just amazing I love all novels of this author

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